The UglyTruth
thetruthisntpretty.com  ·  2009 · $38m · $205m

The Writers

A writing partnership with a run behind it

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A run behind it.

Their credits got them the job

By the time Karen McCullah and Kirsten Smith arrived on The Ugly Truth, they had already written two of the more commercially successful studio comedies of the decade. 10 Things I Hate About You (1999) and Legally Blonde (2001) are the credits that explain the hire. Both films hit their audiences, held up with critics better than the genre average, and demonstrated that McCullah and Smith could engineer the specific mechanism a studio romantic comedy requires: a premise that generates conflict automatically, dialogue that moves fast, and a resolution that feels earned rather than merely scheduled. Columbia Pictures was not buying a spec script when it brought them in; it was buying a track record.

The original screenplay was Nicole Eastman's. Eastman had written a sharper, more caustic draft — the material that attracted early attention and got the project moving. McCullah and Smith came on as the rewrite, which is the kind of three-writer credit situation the guild credit system is built to accommodate. Under Writers Guild of America arbitration rules, a screenplay credit reflects a proportional contribution to the final shooting draft; that all three names appear on screen signals that each contributed enough to cross the threshold. In practice, this is common in studio development, where a writer's original vision is refined, softened or redirected by a second team hired specifically for their genre fluency.

Genre fluency was exactly what McCullah and Smith offered. 10 Things I Hate About You, their first produced credit together, was a Shakespeare adaptation — The Taming of the Shrew relocated to a Seattle high school — and it required them to make a fundamentally abrasive source material palatable without defanging it. The same tension sits at the center of The Ugly Truth: a character who says unpleasant things about gender relations has to remain watchable, even likeable, without the screenplay endorsing everything he says. The writers had practiced a version of this problem before.

Legally Blonde extended the run and sharpened the method. That film's engine is a protagonist whose intelligence is systematically underestimated — a comic structure that depends on the audience knowing more than the other characters do. Again, the writing challenge is balance: the comedy of condescension only works if the screenplay is clearly smarter than the condescending characters. McCullah and Smith passed that test, and the film took enough money globally to confirm that their instincts were commercially calibrated as well as technically sound.

What studios buy when they hire a writing team with a documented run is a reduced development risk. A mid-budget romantic comedy — a film in the range where The Ugly Truth was eventually budgeted, around $38 million — cannot absorb the cost of a screenplay that fails to perform the genre correctly. The infrastructure of the film, including casting, marketing and distribution scheduling, is built on the assumption that the script will do its structural job. McCullah and Smith had demonstrated they could do that job. The romantic comedy is a form with precise internal requirements: antagonism that converts to attraction on a believable arc, a set of obstacles that feel genuinely obstructive before they are removed, and a register that stays light without becoming weightless. Their earlier work had shown command of all three.

The result of the rewrite is a script that functions as designed. Whether it is an ambitious script is a separate question, and most of the negative critical response to the film addressed exactly that — the sense that the material was executing a formula rather than interrogating one. But the formula executed correctly, which is what Columbia needed. The CinemaScore polling on opening night reflected an audience that had received what it came for. Critics who wanted something more searching were measuring the film against a different brief than the one the writers were given.

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Nicole Eastman, Karen McCullah and Kirsten Smith share the credit, and the shape of a studio comedy rewrite is visible in the result.In The Writers

McCullah and Smith were hired because they had delivered before on similar material. Legally Blonde is their most visible antecedent ↗, the film that established the partnership's signature — comedy that keeps its protagonist's dignity intact even when the plot is working hard to undermine it. The Ugly Truth applied that sensibility to a more abrasive premise, and the combination of Eastman's original pitch and the rewrite team's structural experience is what the Writers Guild credit reflects: not a single vision, but a layered one.

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